Design Context Book Feedback

The crit went well yesterday and I got positive feedback to all of the issues I had thought of before hand as well as one or two pointers. I had a bit of time to see Graham and discuss the typography in my design context books. We discussed a few elements which would improve the design and make it work better across all four chapters. I have rarely worked with folding book/poster layouts like this and I find it a bit more complicated to set up and design for.

All of the advice Graham gave me was great and I feel confident to revise the design of the first chapter and get on with the other chapters. Here are some photos of the corrections he marked on for me.